Sunday, March 4, 2012

Classification Essay Outro

Classification Essay Outro
Shadow, Orion, and Sunny – such different personalities, but each such a special part of our family.  I know there are people who don’t like cats.  I was that way once.  But that was before I got to know them, and right now, I can hardly imagine life without them.

Thursday, March 1, 2012

Two Intros to Classification Essay

Two Intros to Classification Essay

Intro 1

Cats have become an ever-present part of life at our house.  There was a time before cats, but that was long ago.  Cats became a necessity in our family because of an overpopulation of mice in the cattle country where we were then living, and this once-upon-a-time-ago city girl, who had never been around any cats other than the local, dirty alley cats, came to discover the endless joys of cat ownership and the great variety within the single species called feline.  Let me tell you about three special cats that now inhabit our home.

Intro 2

Cats.  Some people love them.  Some people hate them.  It’s hard to find someone indifferent to them.  An interesting thing I’ve noticed about cats is that they seem to know who likes them and who doesn’t.  But for some reason, if a cat chooses to stay around a group of people, it always seems to pick the cat-hater’s lap to try to sit on.  It’s strange, but I’ve seen it happen too often to call it coincidence.  I don’t understand cat-haters; not because I haven’t met ornery cats, but because, though cats have certain similarities, they are each so different.  It’s like saying I don’t like flowers because they all stink, remembering the day I happened to get stuck in a patch of skunk cabbage.  That said, I’d like to tell you about three special cats that now inhabit our home.

Tuesday, February 28, 2012

GRAF #'s 15 & 16 Reacton Grafs

GRAF #15

Meta Graf/Reaction Graf on Writing Cause Essay

In the process of thinking about writing a cause essay, I also thought about the resulting effect, since cause and effect obviously go together.  My church is very active in world-wide outreach and many have been on short-term missions, so I interviewed several of them.  I wanted to know what caused them to go and what effect their going had on them and on the people they ministered to.  Rachel’s story impressed me the most, maybe because she was a reluctant participant, only going because so many events fell into place, leading her to believe God really wanted her to go.  Or maybe it was because I could see such an obvious change in her after she returned from her trip.  Or maybe it was the stories she told me of the people she treated there, stories that didn’t fit in with my essay, but that touched my own heart.  Whatever it was, I really enjoyed hearing Rachel’s story and was pleased to be able to share her story with others.



Graf #16

Reaction to Sample Classification Essays

I was glad there were classification essay samples online, since I still had no idea what a classification essay was.  While some essays were nothing I would want to write about or read, others were well-written and interesting.  Seeing how these essays were written and the great variety of topics chosen has given me hope that I can come up with my own idea and write my own essay.  Now, to decide what that will be…

Tuesday, February 21, 2012

Essay #1 - Cause Essay

Essay #1 - Cause Essay

What would cause an ordinary, middle-aged, country-born, Maine-raised woman to leave the comfort of home, use up her only short bit of vacation time allotted for the year, and head to the hot, dry, remote, drought-stricken land of Kenya?  Is this woman a thrill-seeker, looking for unusual adventures?  Could she be an environmentalist, searching for answers to climate change?  Or perhaps she’s suffering from midlife crisis and thinks something so out of the ordinary will help her find what she’s searching for.  Though these could possibly explain one person’s trek into the desert wilderness, they do not explain Rachel’s journey.  Instead of seeking thrills, she is being obedient.  Instead of searching for answers, she is providing them.  Instead of suffering from midlife crisis, she is using her experience and talents to help others.  But how did she get there?  Rachel’s unusual adventure was the result of a group experience, a personal encounter, and a financial gift.  These three set the stage for what was soon to come.

Rachel’s journey began when Mayla, a native of Africa, came to her church and talked about his country, his people, and his vision for his area.  He talked about his desire to help the women, who are the providers for the family.  Mayla’s visit to her church had a surprisingly strong impact on her.  To hear a man talk so lovingly about the women really touched her, and the thought occurred that she might want to go there herself someday. 

Time passed and it didn’t seem likely that anything would come of that fleeting thought.  But Mayla’s words, spoken at her church, remained in the back of her mind.  Then, at a missions conference elsewhere, listening to others speak of the needs and work in foreign lands, Rachel’s heart was stirred once more.  During a pause, she spoke to the woman who happened to be next to her, “Wouldn’t you want to go?”  “No,” was the succinct reply, and yet that brief personal encounter had unexpected results.

In spite of her experiences at church and at the conference, Rachel had finally decided she would not make the trip.  It was definitely a more adventurous ordeal than her timid personality desired.  Then, suddenly, her funding, a primary consideration for anyone desiring to go on a missions trip, was taken care of in a surprising way.  The woman whom she had barely met at the previous conference heard she was considering making the trip and decided to pay for all of her expenses.  This unexpected financial gift was the confirmation she needed.  She knew this was definitely God’s will for her, and therefore she committed to go.

And so, as a result of an African man’s presentation at her church, her random encounter with a strange woman at a missions conference, and the surprise gift of her needed funding; the seed was planted in Rachel’s heart, and the trip was made possible. All these occurrences led to the events of last January, when Rachel headed to Kenya on a Christian medical mission, traveling 14 hours on dusty, bumpy, dirt trails in the back of a tarp-covered truck, along with 8 others from around the world, to reach a Muslim village with no access to medical care.  There she used her nursing experience to minister to these suffering people and was able to share her love for Jesus and His love for all mankind with those who had never heard such words of love from anyone, much less from a stranger.  Consequently,  lives were changed, not only those in Africa, whose medical needs were met, but also Rachel’s, whose faith, love, and desire to serve has grown, and who is now looking forward to wherever her Lord will lead her next.

Saturday, February 18, 2012

GRAF #14 - Isearch Research Plan

GRAF #14
Isearch Research Plan
Since my topic is Alzheimer’s, I plan to do most of my research, if not all, on the internet.  I am expecting to find a wealth of valuable information there.  The problems I foresee are: more information than I need, maybe duplicates of similar information, sorting through it all, deciding what to include and what to leave out, and not enough time to do it all as well as I’d like to.  (I tend to get into my work and research, and my other classes and commitments also require my time and energy.)  I wasn’t planning to talk to anyone, unless that’s a requirement for an I-search, neither am I planning to do any experiments related to this subject; and though there are probably excellent websites on Alzheimer’s out there, I know from experience that each website adds a little something that another one leaves out, so I’m sure I’ll be able to use multiple sources for my project.  That, in a nutshell, is what I plan to do.

Tuesday, February 14, 2012

Cause Essay Outro

Cause Essay Outro
And so, as a result of an African man’s presentation at her church, her random encounter with a strange woman at a missions conference, and the surprise gift of her needed funding; the seed was planted in Rachel’s heart, and the trip was made possible. All these occurrences led to the events of last January, when Rachel headed to Kenya on a Christian medical mission, traveling 14 hours on dusty, bumpy, dirt trails in the back of a tarp-covered truck, along with 8 others from around the world, to reach a Muslim village with no access to medical care.  There she used her nursing experience to minister to these suffering people and was able to share her love for Jesus and His love for all mankind with those who had never heard such words of love from anyone, much less from a stranger. Consequently, lives were changed, not only those in Africa, whose medical needs were met, but also Rachel’s, whose faith, love, and desire to serve has grown, and who is now looking forward to wherever her Lord will lead her next.

Monday, February 13, 2012

2nd Intro Graf to Cause Essay

2nd Intro Graf to Cause Essay

Deep in the desert of Africa, sparse, light-brown vegetation randomly dots the dry, light-brown terrain.  The incessant sun glares down, threatening to scorch any who dare to venture out in the unbearable heat of mid-day.  In the midst of this scene, a skinny, middle-aged white woman sits upon an uncomfortable, makeshift seat in the back of a big, old, minimally-maintained cargo truck, barely protected from the glaring sunshine by a thin tarp as she travels to her destination.  She is jostled continually as the vehicle maneuvers through a land where roads are more a pseudonym than a reality.  Her journey is not unlike those traveled by the early pioneers in their covered wagons as they bravely ventured across the wilderness to a new land.  In fact, her bravery is much like that of her pioneer sisters, though her journey in such difficult circumstances is shorter and with a different purpose.  So, who is this woman, where is she going, and why?  This woman, whom we shall call Rachel, is going on what may be her journey of a lifetime.  A year prior to this, she never would have imagined herself in this situation.  To her, the events leading to this point in her life are almost miraculous.  In fact, Rachel’s unusual adventure is the result of a series of events that began with a public presentation, followed by a chance encounter, which culminated in an unexpected gift – all of which made her trip to Africa possible.